Some countries spend a lot of money to make bicycle usage easier. Why is this? Is this the best solution to traffic congestion?

Over the years, the usage of bicycles has become more popular among the citizens. With its upcoming trend, the government has taken measures to implement new road rules and create paths designated for cycling.

This

initiative has been very useful in helping with

traffic

congestion

as well as

creating a healthier

country

. As the economy progresses, many would start earning a good income and

this

would allow them to purchase motor vehicles.With an increase of motor vehicles on the road, the first issue we face would be

traffic

congestion. Roads are meant to take citizens from point A to B, but now many are utilising driving on roads,

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Uber. Most of the people working for Uber are usually driving around, even though empty in search

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jobs.

This

increases

traffic

among the smaller lanes.

Moreover

, with everyone driving in cars the

country

faces two major problems. With the introduction of more cars, the amount of carbon emissions

also

increases.

This

increases the amount of air pollution in the

country

. As countries need to create more paths for roads, trees are being cut down and the pollution level stays high,

In addition

, as many people sit and drive, with the lack of exercise,obesity is

again

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another issue in the

country

.

This

would

then

lead to serious health issues as medical attention needed to solve

this

problem would soon be at

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high. In conclusion, It is safe

to conclude

that, countries that do spend money towards supporting bicycles are utilising their funds well bicycles do play an important role in both

traffic

congestion

,

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and

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health of the

country

and its people.