*ASSIGNMENT* Scientists believe that in order to protect the environment, people must use less energy in their daily lives. However, most people have not changed the way they live. Why do you think many people have not taken individual action? What could be done to encourage them to take action?

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It has been scientifically proven by great scholars that the appropriate way to secure our environs is
usage
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the usage
of minimal
energy
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in everyday living. Despite
this
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discovery,
majority
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the majority
of the
populace
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are
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is
adamant with regards to implementation. In my own view, their nonchalance could be
ignorance
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ignorant
of the negative effect global warming would pose on individual's general
health
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and probably in inaccessibility of modernized
energy
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sources, among many other reasons. There are several reasons why a good number of the
populace
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are
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is
nonchalant regarding implementation
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a nonchalant regarding implementation
the nonchalant regarding implementation
of minimal usage of
energy
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.
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, quite a number of the
populace
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are ignorant that excess
energy
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toxifies
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the atmosphere leading to global warming and
on the other hand
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, they are not aware of the negative effect of
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global warming on their
health
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. In the same
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a blood vessel that carries blood from the capillaries toward the heart
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, those in rural communities, may not be able to afford LED lamps, cooking cylinders,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
, so
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, they resort to burning firewoods and local lamps with yellow flames which exacerbate these dangers. Families and individuals should be well informed on the dangers of global warming to
health
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and proper awareness should be created
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with
for
by
the minimal use of
energy
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. Government should
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improve power supply to limit
burning
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the burning
of fossil fuel through generators. Again,
Government
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the Government
should
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endeavour to make LED lamps accessible and affordable by either supplying it freely to those in rural communities or reducing the cost of purchase. In conclusion, the
populace
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should be well informed of the dangers of global warming to
health
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and
Government
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the Government
should as well endeavour to make LED lamps available and accessible to rural communities.
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