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You recently visited a foreign country and gost some information at the Tourist Information Centre. The information given to you was wrong. Write a letter to the centre manager and explain:  what was the information required  how was the wrong information provided?  what problem did you have because of this?

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Dear Manager, Myself Sejal Dhaduk and I am writing
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 letter to express my dissatisfaction about
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 information which I got from your tour guide.
Last
 month, when I decided to arrange my business meeting
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 Canada, before
this
 trip, I called on your tourism company to get some details about the best accommodation and transportation which was nearest
in
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 my meeting place. I received mail from your side and I paid $5 for that. When I read the mail that received from your side, I was extremely happy because the guide said that I stayed
hotel
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 Star and which was very renowned in that area.
Besides
, the view of it was very excellent and pleasant as well as public transportation easily available from there. But when I reached there, I realized that I got totally false details and
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 was not in good condition and located between two high rise
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.
Moreover
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public transportation
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 far from there around 2 kilometres. Due to these issues, I faced inconvenience and I did not take good rest there because
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the AC was not working properly and I
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 required to wake up early in the morning because I didn't find any taxi from that area and walk for 2 Km. I am appreciative
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 If you will take some action against the person who gave me wrong detail and be care full and Please send proper information in the future to any customers. I am looking forward to your reply.
Your
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 Sincerely, Sejal
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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