Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to apologise in response to the complaint you have raised regarding the noise from my flat. The noise was because yesterday, we celebrated our daughter's birthday inside our flat. Let me explain in detail. As you know, even though we have been staying here for many years, never caused disturbance to others.

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, we had plans to celebrate at our community lounge,

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, due to the recent

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all the

society

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amenities are closed until

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notice.

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we invited limited guests, our daughter's friends were the reason for the annoyance.While we were cooking, they played music at

high

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volume. I would like to sincerely apologise for what has happened yesterday. It was generous on your part,

instead

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of complaining to the

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security, you informed me. In the future, we will make sure that the volume is minimal from our end.

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, whenever we plan to celebrate any events, we will make sure to arrange it in some party halls or lounges. Thanks for your understanding. Yours

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sincerely

, Harish

chigurupatiTue Jun 09 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

175 words

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Do you agree that the advantages cars bring outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people work long hour, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?