Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

SOME STATES THAT IT IS BETTER TO ACCEPT UNSATISFACTORY JOB OR POVERTY, WHILE OTHERS BELIEVE THAT ONE SHOULD TRY TO IMPROVE
SUCH
SITUATION WITH A VIEW TO ENSURING BETTERMENT. IN MY OPINION, EVERYONE SHOULD TRY HEART AND SOUL IN ORDER TO PROMOTE HIS CURRENT STATUS. ON THE ONE HAND, PEOPLE LIVING AT VARIOUS PARTS OF THE WORLD ARE ALWAYS STRUGGLING WITH THEIR OWN
LIFE
AND IT IS SOMETIMES DIFFICULT FOR THEM TO EVADE FROM WHERE THEY ARE. THE REASON IS MAYBE THEY ARE FROM A WAR TORN
COUNTRY
OR THEY ARE DEPRIVED OF THEIR AMENITIES
SUCH
AS EDUCATION, TRANSPORTATION, FOOD OR EVEN FRESHWATER.
FOR EXAMPLE
, MAJORITY OF INHABITANTS LIVING IN GHANA DEPENDS ON RAINWATER AS THEY HAVE TO COVER ALMOST 20 KILOMETER DAILY IN ORDER TO REACH THE NEAREST WATER SOURCE. IT MIGHT BE POSSIBLE FOR MEN, BUT NOT FOR PREGNANT WOMEN, OLD PEOPLE OR CHILDREN. AND AS A MATTER OF FACT, IT IS HIGH TIME FOR THEM TO ACCEPT WHERE THEY ARE AS THINKING OF A COMFORTABLE
LIFE
IS NOTHING BUT A DREAM IN
SUCH
CIRCUMSTANCE.
IN CONTRAST
, PEOPLE, WHO DO NOT FACE DIFFICULTY IN ENJOYING BASIC RIGHTS, SHOULD TRY THEIR BEST AS DEVELOPMENT OF ONE AS WELL AS ONE’S
COUNTRY
IS IMPROBABLE WITHOUT HARD WORK. IF THEY DO SO, THEY WILL BE ABLE TO LEAD A PROSPEROUS
LIFE
AND
AS A RESULT
, THEIR
COUNTRY
WILL EVEVATE THEIR POSITION AND PLAY A VITAL ROLE IN WORLD POLITICS AS WELL AS HUMANITARIAN AID.
FOR INSTANCE
, THINK OF GERMANY AFTER
SECOND
WORLD WAR AS MOST OF THE MAJOR CITIES WERE DILAPIDATED AT THAT TIME, BUT WITHIN A VERY SHORT TIME FRAME GERMANS RETAIN THEIR POSITION AS A DEVELOPED
COUNTRY
.
HENCE
, BECOME A COMPETITOR OF AMERICANS, WINNER OF THAT WAR, ONLY BY DINT OF DILIGENCE. SO, EVERYBODY SHOULD TRY TO UPLIFT THEIR LIVING STATUS AS WE, HUMAN BEING, ARE BETTER THAN ANY OTHER CREATION AND THERE IS NO DIGNITY IN ACCEPTING A MISERABLE
LIFE
. IN CONCLUSION, I BELIEVE THAT WE HAVE TO CREATE A BETTER FUTURE
INSTEAD
OF ACCEPTING PRESENT SITUATION AS THROUGH
THIS
WAY WE WILL BE ABLE TO ENSURE A BETTER FUTURE FOR US ALONG WITH OUR CHILDREN.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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