Some people think that it is too difficult for poor people or people from rural areas to go to university. So that the universities should make it especially easy to them. Do you agree or disagree?

it

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It

is argued by many that universities should enforce a

postive

characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.

positive

bais

a partiality that prevents objective consideration of an issue or situation

bias

basis

base

when considering

applicant

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application

form less fortunate family background since they. Personally, I believe that

such

arguements

a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true

arguments

for

this

policy

do not hold water and

colleage

a fibrous scleroprotein in bone and cartilage and tendon and other connective tissue; yields gelatin on boiling

collagen

admission

should judge everyone with equal standard. People who agree to

this

affirmative action often believe that students from those areas deserve

lower standard

Suggestion

a lower standard

because education in those areas are of lower quality.

However

, they have ignored the fact that most students who did well in the

colleage

the body of faculty and students of a college

college

admission

exam rely mostly on their self study rather than

guidance

Suggestion

the guidance

of their teachers at school.

Therefore

, the lack of high quality teachers in poor/rural area

should be serve

Suggestion

should serve

should be served

as a reason for implementing

this

policy

.

In addition

, if we lower the

admission

standard for

particular group

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a particular group

of student, it would be extremely unfair to other students that put great effort in studying for the examination.

Moreover

,

this

policy

is easily prone to exploitation. There is not doubt that many students would try to game the system by moving to those

neighbourhood

Suggestion

neighbourhoods

before applying to universities.

This

way, not

only it is unfair

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only is it unfair

to others, but

also

distortion

Suggestion

distorts

distort

distorting

the original purpose of

this

policy

. Adding to that, it is

also

likely to cause

social problem

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social problems

a social problem

such

as property price inflating because opportunist might seize

this

mentality to sell houses to eager parents who wanted to help their children to gain

edge

Suggestion

an edge

in exam. In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the proposition to lower the

admission

standard for any particular group of student. Not only the

policy

is not justify

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is not justified

does not justify

doesn't justify

has not justified

, it

also create

Suggestion

also creates

has also created

loophole

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loopholes

a loophole

for students to gain unfair advantage.