Should the international community do more to tackle the threat of global Global warming ?

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Global warming has become one major concern in
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millennium.
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is a debate existing that whether international society
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does
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menace?In my opinion
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not only the international society, but
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local people and government should put the best foot forward to curb
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problem. There are plethora of reason of behind the global warming
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and foremost is the
over population
too much population
overpopulation
of the human race and its unlimited greed.Modern science has tremendously grown
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man’s life expectancy
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extended.
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cramped habitants of people have exploited the nature and its resources
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as a result
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the natures default system has wretched
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the phenomenon called global warming. Many argue that the international community has to be initiated more action plans to control the global a warming
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in my opinion the action plan should come from every individual and local governments should implement the laws and regulations to protect the environment.International community intact already working on
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problem.
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the growing concern of global warming has made all allies of united nation bought together in Paris
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2015 and signed important agreements between the countries by the interest of environmental protection especially focuses on global warming
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many countries obsolete rules have been changed
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a new rule has been introduced in India, which is vehicle after 10 years need to be scraped and capital city of the India, Delhi imposed certain rules to follow by the native people to use the vehicle only on odd days
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which resulted in the reduction of the carbon emission. Local governments should make awareness campaigns in the society.Locally schools should include the syllabus to give awareness to children that how important is to protect the environment. Sea life and wildlife need to be protected.Over exploitation needs to be curbed by imposing strict regulation and rules.Natural resources shouldn’t be overused. In conclusion
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Every individual plays an imperative role in the chain action of damaging the environments that
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not only international community need to be
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working
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but
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local communities should aware and practice it for a better world
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global warming
  • threat
  • international community
  • tackle
  • pressing issue
  • global collaboration
  • action
  • cooperation
  • root causes
  • neglecting
  • responsibility
  • catastrophic consequences
  • efforts
  • combat
  • inspiration
  • further action
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