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In today’s world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

It is true that artists
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 as musicians, painters and writers have still gained a great deal of respect from their audiences and readers in spite of the dominance of advanced
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 and
technology
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. Personally, I think the role of
art
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 is irreplaceable because it conveys many meaningful messages about
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life
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life, such
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 as the mental development and literary appreciation which
science
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 and
technology
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 fail to.
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,
art
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 would significantly contribute to the mental development of individuals. In fact, literary works could help their admirers
to realize
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realize
 what they need to do for their lives after reading every page thoroughly.
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, when they face difficulty in both their professional
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 and private
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,
art
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 would enable them to hide themselves from the harsh reality and find their inner peace. To illustrate, “Hạt giống tâm hồn” is one of the most impressive self-help
books
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book
 readers, especially teenagers, could choose to get themselves in during their
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 crisis.
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 book provides them with valuable
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 lessons and eye-opening experiences which they could find with
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 and
technology
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.
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 helps them to overcome challenges in
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 and somehow shape their personality traits in a more holistic manner.
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,
art
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 could improve a great appreciation for the culture and
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history which
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history, which
 artists try to express in their works. As a matter of fact, the culture and
history
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 are two of the main sources of
creation
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creative
 materials and become a big part in the arts industry.
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 not only strengthens understanding about different cultures and
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 in many parts of the
world but
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world, but
also
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 promotes a sense of identity. Take Vietnam as a concrete example, many Vietnamese literary works
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 as fairy tales or poems and folk
songs pass
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songs to pass
 from generation to generation through bedtime storytelling of grandparents or parents.
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 practically preserves our cultures and
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 and allows young people to understand traditional values.
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, innovation and modern breakthroughs are the main focus
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on
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 and
technology
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, which guides humans to live for the present and future only. To conclude, in my view,
art
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 is of great significance in the sense of mentality and identity which
science
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 and
technology
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 cannot.

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