People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society?
It has been said that people always fail to
setup
a perfect Suggestion
set up
society
and there Use synonyms
ar
a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
mant
people agreed with that. a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number
many
However
, I believe that Linking Words
thera
are several in or at that place
there
solution
can be Suggestion
solutions
impelented
to make the world better place.
On one handforced or compelled or put in force
implemented
,
people are asking what is the ideal community. From my point of view, there are many aspects which can be considered Accept space
,
wheter
introduces two alternatives
whether
this
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society
is perfect or not. Use synonyms
Firstly
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,
it would be an Accept space
,
edquitable
fair to all parties as dictated by reason and conscience
equitable
society
where has no room for gender inequity, discrimination or the wide gab between the poor and the rich. It means that all people should have the same Use synonyms
chancee
to have their a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
chance
chances
basics
needs Suggestion
basic
such
as education and Linking Words
pulic
health system.
not private; open to or concerning the people as a whole
public
police
Secondly
, the Linking Words
dreain
Suggestion
nationsn
have sustainable a politically organized body of people under a single government
nations
developemnt
. act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
the
government should reduce the rate of Suggestion
The
unemployemnt
as much as possible. In additions, maintaining reasonable the cost of livingthe state of being unemployed or not having a job
unemployment
.
Beside developing the national economy, protecting and preserving the environment must be taken in consideration in all nations.
Accept space
.
On the other hand
, It is so difficult for Linking Words
human
to Suggestion
humans
the human
acheive
these to gain with effort
achieve
reqirements
when creating required activity
requirements
requirement
such
a kind of Linking Words
society
. Use synonyms
This
mainly came from the selfishness and the lack of education.
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Although
people fail in Linking Words
estaplishing perfecit
communitySuggestion
establishing a perfect
estaplishing perfect
establishing perfect
establishing perfecit
,
they have to do practical measures which can be applied. The Accept space
,
goverment
and organizations might probably launch campaigns which aim to raise the awareness of the public the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
of
living in harmony with other residents and the nature. That will have those residents generate the stability incomes, so they can pay for the individuals from the governments. When they have a stable life, the proportion of crime in the community is decreased.
To sum up, There is difficulty in making a dream Suggestion
about
society
in the real life, but it is able to improve the life in the present become better.Use synonyms
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