People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society?

It has been said that people always fail to
setup
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set up
a perfect
society
and there
ar
a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
mant
a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number
many
people agreed with that.
However
, I believe that
thera
in or at that place
there
are several
solution
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solutions
can be
impelented
forced or compelled or put in force
implemented
to make the world better place. On one hand
,
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,
people are asking what is the ideal community. From my point of view, there are many aspects which can be considered
wheter
introduces two alternatives
whether
this
society
is perfect or not.
Firstly
,
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,
it would be an
edquitable
fair to all parties as dictated by reason and conscience
equitable
society
where has no room for gender inequity, discrimination or the wide gab between the poor and the rich. It means that all people should have the same
chancee
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
chance
chances
to have their
basics
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basic
needs
such
as education and
pulic
not private; open to or concerning the people as a whole
public
police
health system.
Secondly
, the
dreain
nationsn
a politically organized body of people under a single government
nations
have sustainable
developemnt
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
.
the
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The
government should reduce the rate of
unemployemnt
the state of being unemployed or not having a job
unemployment
as much as possible. In additions, maintaining reasonable the cost of living
.
Accept space
.
Beside developing the national economy, protecting and preserving the environment must be taken in consideration in all nations.
On the other hand
, It is so difficult for
human
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humans
the human
to
acheive
to gain with effort
achieve
these
reqirements
required activity
requirements
requirement
when creating
such
a kind of
society
.
This
mainly came from the selfishness and the lack of education.
Although
people fail in
estaplishing perfecit
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establishing a perfect
estaplishing perfect
establishing perfect
establishing perfecit
community
,
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,
they have to do practical measures which can be applied. The
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
and organizations might probably launch campaigns which aim to raise the awareness of the public
of
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about
living in harmony with other residents and the nature. That will have those residents generate the stability incomes, so they can pay for the individuals from the governments. When they have a stable life, the proportion of crime in the community is decreased. To sum up, There is difficulty in making a dream
society
in the real life, but it is able to improve the life in the present become better.
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