Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
In
this
cut throat competition, every person
wants to become a rich and wealthy. So some would like to do job
in their teenage life, whereas some people wants to get proper knowledge in some particular Suggestion
the job
a job
jobs
field
. I would like to mention here that both the opinion is good as so many people are well known without getting a bachelors degreedegree
. But in my opinion education is key for success.
a position on a scale of intensity or amount or quality
degree
degree degree
Firstly
, Nowadays, as I mention education is required for success and for a better future. Because if you have any degree
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degree, then
then
you can simply apply for the position and then
you have an option of showing your talent or any extra skill which might lead you to the upper position but if you do not have degree
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a degree
then
this
not an easy task. Secondly
, there is immense benefit of doing university and college like, at the age of 20 person
have
enough maturity to decide which is the right path and suitable to his/her skill. Suggestion
has
In addition
, person
becomes a focus-oriented as he/she already spent 3-4 years in Suggestion
a person
the person
persons
one
field so,
they started admiring so many people from their Suggestion
field, so
field
and they got confidence to do the hard workwork
.
activity directed toward making or doing something
work
work work
Thirdly
, as per recent trend so many colleges and university students get direct placement in there
final year, so without even wasting a single day they have of them or themselves
their
job offer
and they can start earning. Suggestion
a job offer
Also
, some courses have compulsory internship and sometimes they got an opportunity to work in a multinational company so they got enough experience as well in their field
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field, although
although
they got very less money in the form of stipend still it worth after one
year of completion when they get job
offer with good package.
However
, the phenomenon of doing job
directly after school is faltering but there are so many successful people in the world whose earning is way more than educated person
. For example
Sachin Tendulkar, who know as a God cricket, he doesn't have any degree
after ten, but his firm determination and hard work made him number one
in his field
. AS well as so many people wants to join their parents' business and don't want to waste their three or four in education. One
signal paper cannot decide your future, just like that if you give 100% in any field
and do constant hard work you can get success.
Nutshell, I would like to say that there are enormous benefits if you get a proper degree
and tad benefit if you do not have proper degree but
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degree, but
one
can stop you from becoming a successful if you give your heart and soul in a particular fieldfield
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field
field field
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