Do the advantages derived from the use of chemicals preservatives in food processing the disadvantages?

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In the
last
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five decades using chemicals in
food
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processing is increasing due to the scarcity of foods to supply all
population
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populations
through the world, especially in developed countries it is becoming a common condition. All market emporiums are full of all sorts of foods ranging from bread up to citrus fruits. But they are almost all made by artificial ways. Whereas,
this
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means that differing from the ingredients of people’s
food
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receipt changed considerably. In
this
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essay I will compare
pros
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the pros
and
cons sides
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cons, sides
of
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by
using chemicals and prove why the disadvantages are more dangerous. As I mentioned
above people
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above, people
are demanding more and more foods as their living conditions are improving. It can be observed in the daily lives of people.
For example
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, a man earning extra money except his salary
do not want
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does not want
to eat just a loaf of bread, two eggs and a cap of tea for his breakfast. He wants additional
disserts
a dish served as the last course of a meal
desserts
deserts
dessert
such
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as sweets and a cup of coffee.
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, common people gratify for a loaf of bread and a cup of tea. Considering these details some businessmen are finding new easy ways of satisfying those highly increasing demands of people spending as less as money to produce.
On the other hand
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the disadvantages of using these artificial ways to increase
food
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producing bring long term
affects
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
for future generations.
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, using chemicals in producing is influencing the nutrients of foods negatively.
Although
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meat is consumed more, it is giving less supplementary nutrients to be strong. Rather, the substances aimed to grow the meat fast artificially, affecting organic genes of people.
As a result
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, obesity is
also
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appeared a big problem for human being. Negative effects of chemicals are insurmountable
in addition
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to these facts. In conclusion, using chemicals in
food
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processing is the result of running behind revenue. It should be controlled if the producing process is natural.
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