Some people think it is more important to plant trees in open areas in towns and cities than to provide more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, the importance of planting trees in open areas has been highly discussed in the
last
few years. At the same time, some people who disagree with
this
statement, claims that people should provide more housings in cities due to the high demand of working or living spaces. From my perspective, planting trees in the cities would bring more benefits to human society than building housings. As the development of human society, human beings create a lot of pollution
that is
detrimental to the environment. Planting trees can reduce a great amount of pollution and provide fresh air for people.
Although
the environmental issues are the inevitable result of social development, we
can not
can not
cannot
ignore the consequences of making too much pollution on our planet. The area forests
has been disappearing
Suggestion
have been disappearing
rapidly in the
last
few decades. It is our responsibility to plant enough trees on our planet in order to have a sustainable ecosystem.
On the other hand
, it is undeniable that people need more housings to work in the downtown area.
For example
, the financial service
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
such
as the Wall Street is fully occupied by different kinds of companies. Personally, I don't like the working environment around the Wall Street due to the lack of trees or nature. People need to have a work-life balance even if they are busy with making a living. At least, people need some outside places to stay and chat with friends in their spare time. Trees can create a large area of shade for people to relax during the summer time, which would be necessary for getting a work-life balance.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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Example:

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