Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a woman’s role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice

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There are few people who believe that a female should have equal rights and equal chance to work as men, but there are others who think that girl should only stay at home and do house activity and take care of children. In

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essay I would like to express my point of view with suitable examples.

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, In old days there was lots of discrimination between male and female.Female wasn't given a freedom, they were forced to stay home and look after the house and their kids.

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, In India, in old day female working outside was seen as a disgrace and many of them were not welcome in their family. But with the time change the culture

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started changing and now we can find many working ladies and they are good at it, even found better

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men in some parts of the job.

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, I strongly agree with the statement as they should be given equal rights and chance to success, as History is proof that many females have achieved

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great success

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example Kalpna Chawla, as she was

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first astronaute

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the first astronaut

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to go into space, even though she was from the country where in their culture working outside was prohibited.

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makes an example and motivate other females to get up and stand for them self and look forward to achieve great success. To summarize, Female and male have their own abilities and they use them in their own unique style. There might be a place where the girl might do approach better

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what men can do, and there can

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be something which men can do thing better

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a lady. They both are separate from each other, but not if not given chance to them,

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we might not learn what we learn from them now. They care of their child and same way they care for their work and business, which might not be same for males, so if we encourage them

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it will help our society to develop.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Topic Vocabulary:

Gender equality
Women empowerment
Breaking stereotypes
Equal opportunities
Career advancement
Progressive societies
Work-life balance
Changing perceptions
Successful women

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