Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a woman’s role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice

There are few people who believe that a female should have equal rights and equal chance to work as men, but there are others who think that girl should only stay at home and do house activity and take care of children. In
this
essay I would like to express my point of view with suitable examples.
Firstly
, In old days there was lots of discrimination between male and female.Female wasn't given a freedom, they were forced to stay home and look after the house and their kids.
For example
, In India, in old day female working outside was seen as a disgrace and many of them were not welcome in their family. But with the time change the culture
also
started changing and now we can find many working ladies and they are good at it, even found better
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than
men in some parts of the job.
Secondly
, I strongly agree with the statement as they should be given equal rights and chance to success, as History is proof that many females have achieved
such
great success
such
.
for
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For
example Kalpna Chawla, as she was
first astronaute
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the first astronaut
first astronaut
first astronauts
to go into space, even though she was from the country where in their culture working outside was prohibited.
This
makes an example and motivate other females to get up and stand for them self and look forward to achieve great success. To summarize, Female and male have their own abilities and they use them in their own unique style. There might be a place where the girl might do approach better
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than
what men can do, and there can
also
be something which men can do thing better
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than
a lady. They both are separate from each other, but not if not given chance to them,
then
we might not learn what we learn from them now. They care of their child and same way they care for their work and business, which might not be same for males, so if we encourage them
then
it will help our society to develop.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Gender equality
  • Women empowerment
  • Breaking stereotypes
  • Equal opportunities
  • Career advancement
  • Progressive societies
  • Work-life balance
  • Changing perceptions
  • Successful women
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