In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main cause of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

I am writing to show my willingness to work in the head office in the United States of America for a couple of months due to several private reasons The trees that my wife works for an international hotel called tri town as a marketing manager and she will supposed to travel to the US
next
months for a few educational courses in fact I would like to be with my friends in
this
journey for about six months if things go according to plan due to the fact that my wife is very stressful in the majority of time and I think that
this
mission will be in three kids for her without me Actually one of my closest colleagues called Ali Rezza her IV in our department is very quick learner and
also
conscientious about everything and I have taught him lots of things which are related to my job since tomorrow is ago and I am pretty sure that he will be a good substitute
instead
of me in the situation what is more I can do some assignments through telephone or laptop in
this
. Even at weekends For
this
item I hope my request is
valued
well grounded in logic or truth or having legal force
valid
and logical enough to draw your attention and if you accept my requisition I will definitely work for our company without any on leave
this
year please
Accept comma addition
year, please
collaborate with me in
this
respect and save my application to the head office for assistance and
next
proceedings I look forward to receiving your response as quickly as
possible please
Accept comma addition
possible, please
let me know if you require any
further
information.
Submitted by Amir Hes on

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