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School teaching should focus on success on the workforce and less attention should be given to academic achievement, to what extent do you agree or disagree

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When it comes to school, many questions are raised. It is observed that school has to concentrate in victory of work-people rather
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 educational accomplishment. To
last
 extent I disagree with the viewpoints, it will be argued ahead.
To Begin
 the contrary view, staff of a particular campus, most people give the importance to them, and can lead to selfishness,
for instance
: Teachers are the one who receives respect from the people and students mainly, in that case liberty is observed with any of them, but if they only control them than it is probably the case where scholars can get defamation. Any parents search for better scholars
Furthermore teacher
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Furthermore, teacher
 will not represent the entire world, but yes (honour).
However
, the achievement of school or student can be beneficial, as it increases the popularity of the best institutions and so on,
also
 it could be much proven best for students that can help in future,
for example
: If
any
Suggestion
Any
 one pupil achieves the highest level in the competition from several competitive in one of the project,
then
 the reward is not only for leaner but along with the schools and
this
 can make a great Name in the area or globally. To conclude, if a secondary concentrates more and more on its good and name by selecting best students and giving liberty to them so that they can make higher level of respect for institutions as well as the student in their future life.
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