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It is thought by some that its better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#city #life #countryside
Some people believe that city life is better to boost the career. On the other side, some prefer countryside areas because they want peace. It is believed that city life offers a modern living style than
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
 and
that is
main reason people
Suggestion
the main reason people
a main reason people
 these days choose to live a well developed town where all facilities are available like good health system, career boost, a competitive work environment, advanced education system, neat and clean streets and
orginized
formed into a structured or coherent whole
organized
 traffic.
On the other hand
, there are plenty of other options for individuals in cities like shopping malls, theme parks, cinemas, gyms, swimming pools and many other attractions. Despite all these facilities, the population of cities are 10 times of countryside's populations which leads into more traffic and buildings than trees that causes global warming in
citiy
a large and densely populated urban area; may include several independent administrative districts
city
 areas. As per the researchers, landscape areas are very peaceful and full of trees and plants that maintain a better weather in the areas. Individuals living in landscape tend to live longer than persons living in cities, it's all because of the living environment. In my view, there should be a balance in the city and landscape area as both are very essential for living and a better life. To sum up, both have its own advantages and disadvantages, but there should be a balance in these two tows to a better and healthy lifestyle.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • metropolitan
  • infrastructure
  • cosmopolitan
  • commute
  • sociocultural
  • prosperity
  • sustainability
  • rural
  • tranquility
  • urbanization
  • relocation
  • residential
  • populace
  • ecological footprint
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