Some people think computer and internet are important in children study,but others think students can learn effectively in school and with teacher.discuss both and give your own opinion

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are vital in infants
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in school is more important because without teacher every child became lazzy easily,
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are essential for teenager,yet others belive students can learn easy in
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital literacy
  • interactive learning
  • educational games
  • virtual simulations
  • traditional textbooks
  • structured learning environments
  • real-time feedback
  • personalized guidance
  • social interaction
  • communication skills
  • teamwork
  • broader range of knowledge
  • engagement
  • discipline
  • learning objectives
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