Extreme sports such as skydiving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Adventure sports like skydiving and skiing have gained much popularity in the recent years. Some people are of the opinion that

such

sports can be too dangerous, thereby, should not be allowed.

However

, In my opinion, provided there are safety arrangements and trained professionals facilitating the sport it should be allowed. Sports like skydiving should be done with appropriate checks to detect malfunction of equipment.

Such

sports when done with appropriate caution can be a lot of fun and some places like New

zealand

the largest island of Denmark and the site of Copenhagen

Zealand

attract a lot of

tourist

Suggestion

tourists

for

this

very reason.

Secondly

, there should be run by trained professionals who would

be trained

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also be trained

also

in CPR and other rescue measures in order to provide the service in the 1st place. People who oppose the idea of extreme sports are of

this

opinion because they believe that people who participate in

such

sport are endangering their lives.

Therefore

Accept comma addition

Therefore, such

such

sport should not be promoted.