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The important information on population, gross domestic product per capita, and life expectancy in the United States, United Kingdom, China, and Russia.

The table illustrates the important information on population, gross domestic product per capita, and
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expectancy
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 in the United States, United Kingdom, China, and Russia. Overall, China has the highest number of individuals, but the GDP per person is the lowest in all countries,
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 to the US that has the highest GDP. American's
life
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expectancy
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 is the shortest as compared to the British as the longest. China has the largest population of around 1.4 billion people, but each person produces only $6,807, the lowest in four countries, and a
life
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expectancy
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 of about 75.2 years.
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 Americans earn almost eight times more than a person in China produce, their average
life
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expectancy
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 is 69.2 years, the shortest in four countries. The United Kingdom has the smallest number of citizens of almost 65 million individuals with GDP per capita of around $42,000. British people live about 81.5 years, the longest
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 in four nations. Russia has a population of nearly 144 million, $14,987 GDP per capita, and 72.3 years an average of
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 to death period.

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