Some people believe that attending to school right now would not be dangerous for students and the society. Others think that because of the covid-19, this could be really harmful. What is your opinion?

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nowdays
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
peolple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
mus take measures to
mitigatethese
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mitigate these
possible problems since
this
virus is affecting the
mayorityof
countries, it can be a little risky, in fact it can cause major problems for children and adults. Undoubtedly
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the cities and countries can provide solutions to
this
disease "virus "so that people stay at home and do not o out to expose themselves
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more than all the children who go to
chool
an educational institution
school
and
therefore
generate touch with
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not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
people
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for
wich
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
reason they it would make the virus more prone. In my opinion , in Colombia ,it try to take extreme measures to close all commerce and
also
all schools, since it wanted to protect minors by closing physical activities ,all
this
it did so that the covid-19 did not continue , because it is so dangerous to the country sencondly ,there are several actions that goverments cold be take to solve the problem described above ,firsly, a simple solution would be to increase the time in home ,reduce the measures of going out to public places and
also
try to take jobs for low_income peple , a
second
measure would be to helpe the people, who really need it with a market or servies.
Finally
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try to relate to other countries to bring the cure and treat
peolple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
who are infected and to carry out the resumption of student activities and jobs
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In conclusion
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various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that it
colud
requests polite permission
could
be to arise if the population continues to leave or does not continue the measures and help the people with some resources in food and other things
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