Genetic engineering is a dangerous trend. It should be limited. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is often argued that using genetic engineering in agriculture, medicine and transplantation is good solving in limited materials. But, I am not sure
in
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on
that and I partly disagree with
this
idea and
this
essay will discuss about it.
First
of all, world health organisation and other respected communities understood meal problems across the globe. In African,
latin
relating to languages derived from Latin
Latin
American and Asian countries having
undernutrition
problems. All of
this
followed by
bad cultivation
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the bad cultivation
of
ground
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the ground
, not enough rain and not enough measure of
technic
of or relating to technique or proficiency in a practical skill
technical
technique
. In my opinion,
one
of the
way
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ways
to solve
this
problem would be genetic engineering.
For example
, with help genetic engineering in agriculture possible to find out new type of seeds for growing strong crops where rain
goes
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is going
hardly ever,
Such
as decisions would be save
life
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the life
of
African child
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an African child
African children
the African child
and people.
Secondly
, from the other side genetic engineering is dangerous for natural products and could damage on
genetic code level
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the genetic code level
of humanity. Manufactures of developed country use
genetic
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genetically
modified vegetables in their
market places
the world of commercial activity where goods and services are bought and sold
marketplaces
and want to get faith and higher incomes. But, no
one
tells us how
such
us vegetables influence for our
organisator
instance,
one
of the respectable news
agency
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agencies
published article directed to GMV. Here was about Mars and kidder company products
where
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
used
genetical
by genetic mechanisms
genetically
modified
milk which
Accept comma addition
milk, which
dangerous for
health
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healthy
healthier
children, In conclusion, I know that genetic engineering has
two side
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two, side
two sides
two sides sides
one
of
this
directed to quickly solve meal problems and another to medical need of in
pharmacy field
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the pharmacy field
. But I strongly believe that all of
this
must work only for developing our health and fighting with meal problem in poor countries.
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