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These days we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviors. Do you agree or disagree

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? Today,
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the media
a
play
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are playing
s a strong role in our life, and people see the world through it.
Although
, it is entertaining, the intensity that shows on
television
 effects on children. I think that
this
 violence is very dangerous. So, I do not agree with
this
. Violence on
television
 has a negative impact on children's attitude. Today, children spend a lot of time in front of the screen because parents have a lot of work and so busy. Because, parents cannot watch their kids all the time, children see everything on the
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television
television
's programs without instructions. Children do not know what is correct or false, so anything can effect and stay in their minds. Children
also
 act what did see, and they may hurt themselves during
this
. On
other sid
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the other side
e, media can be positive, and it can learn our children useful things. If
television
shows sport
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shows, sports
s programs, it will help children to learn how they protect their health. If it presents religious programs, it will support them to learn about their religion.
However
, channels do not do
this
; they offer a lot of programs have
fightin
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fought
g, killing, and force. All of these can effect on children's
behavio
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
r. In conclusion, people are watching a large amount of violence on
television
, and these effects on children's
behavio
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
r
wit
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in
h a negative way. I disagree with
this
 because it can harmful our children.
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