What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?

Today world is moving toward rapid development in the industries as a cascading effect it has
lot
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lots
of benefits at the same time it
also
has the worst effect
such
as
water
pollution
.
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In
this
we will briefly see how various animals and humans are affected
with
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by
this
problem
.
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Firstly when
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Firstly, when
the factories and sewage discharge into the
water
bodies
in directly
not in a forthright manner
indirectly
affects the marine organisms
.
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The oxygen content in the
water
is deprecated because of
this
.
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In recent times we
here
perceive (sound) via the auditory sense
hear
that lot of blue whales are being died due to consumption of plastic wastes that are thrown into the
water
.
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This
is not limited only to
the the
definite article
the
blue mammals
.
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Polluting the
water
also
makes the reproduction of the living beings difficult
.
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Also
the chemical particulars of domestic sewer are the matter which must be concerned about contamination of waters in earth mother. In today's world already we the humans are find experience the effect of
this
problem
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We are
acute
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acutely
short of fresh
water
for
drinking which
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drinking, which
directly affects the nutrition of the body.
Furthermore
, we have to mention the plastic, as
most important material
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the most important material
which today, is the biggest issue about pollution of waters. The plastics can hurt the fishes Biosystems. To conclude
this
we are in the right time to change the
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
of the making the
water
polluted and save the world
.
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Overall, it
is seem
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seems
that we have to noticed to
this
vital matter, of
course for
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course, for
now and future living of our after generations
in
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of
planet earth.
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