What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?

#water #pollution #effects #life #society

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Today world is moving toward rapid development in the industries as a cascading effect it has

lot

Suggestion

lots

of benefits at the same time it

also

Linking Words

has the worst effect

such

Linking Words

water

Use synonyms

pollution

Accept space

this

Linking Words

we will briefly see how various animals and humans are affected

with

Suggestion

this

Linking Words

problem

Accept space

Linking Words

Firstly when

Accept comma addition

Firstly, when

the factories and sewage discharge into the

water

Use synonyms

bodies

in directly

not in a forthright manner

indirectly

affects the marine organisms

Accept space

The oxygen content in the

water

Use synonyms

is deprecated because of

this

Linking Words

Accept space

In recent times we

here

perceive (sound) via the auditory sense

hear

that lot of blue whales are being died due to consumption of plastic wastes that are thrown into the

water

Use synonyms

Accept space

This

Linking Words

is not limited only to

the the

definite article

the

blue mammals

Accept space

Polluting the

water

Use synonyms

also

Linking Words

makes the reproduction of the living beings difficult

Accept space

Also

Linking Words

the chemical particulars of domestic sewer are the matter which must be concerned about contamination of waters in earth mother. In today's world already we the humans are find experience the effect of

this

Linking Words

problem

Accept space

We are

acute

Suggestion

acutely

short of fresh

water

Use synonyms

for

drinking which

Accept comma addition

drinking, which

directly affects the nutrition of the body.

Furthermore

Linking Words

, we have to mention the plastic, as

most important material

Suggestion

the most important material

which today, is the biggest issue about pollution of waters. The plastics can hurt the fishes Biosystems. To conclude

this

Linking Words

we are in the right time to change the

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

of the making the

water

Use synonyms

polluted and save the world

Accept space

Overall, it

is seem

Suggestion

seems

that we have to noticed to

this

Linking Words

vital matter, of

course for

Accept comma addition

course, for

now and future living of our after generations

Suggestion

planet earth.

Submitted by Kiran on Fri Jun 12 2020

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
22
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

262 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7
band
The internet has revolutionized communication and access to information. However, some argue that its negative impacts such as isolation and the spread of misinformation, outweigh its benefits. Discuss both sides of this argument and give your own opinion.
It is irrefutable that, due to the advancement of the internet in recent times we live in a global village and it plays a crucial role in terms of communication and information where distance may be shorter or longer. Some arguments have arisen that it has negative effects which lead to isolation and sometimes misinformations are spread exponentially. According to my opinion, apart from some negative consequences, it has multiple positive applications.
6
band
Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?
It is irrefutable that a country’s growth largely depends on how educated and healthy its citizens are. The burgeoning population and the lack of funds often make it harder for the authority to bear the expenses of their needs, especially in education, housing and treatment. I believe that an effective solution would be to divide the expenditures between the government and the individuals.
7
band
Ambition is a positive quality for people to have in society today. How important is it for people who want to succeed in life? Is it a positive or negative characteristic?
It is argued that ambition is an important virtue in today’s society. This essay will discuss how staying ambitious greatly impacts people’s success and then argue that this trait is beneficial as long as people are conscious of maintaining a healthy balance in their lives.
<4
band
In many cities an increasing number of people do not know their neighbours and there is a lack of sense of community. What are the causes of this problem? How can it be solved?
It has become increasingly common these days for people living in the same neighborhood to not know one another. This essay seeks to identify some causes of such and plausible solutions.
4.5
band
In some countries, people encourage their children to get a job or to travel after this and education what are the advantageous and disadvantage?
Every parent has distinctive perspective about choosing certain assets for their juveniles. There is a heated argument over the decision of the modern modern and father who favours that their kids will do any sort of work after the schooling or enjoy life in traveling. In this essay, both the pros and cons will be discussed for this matter.

What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?

Fully explain your ideas

The internet has revolutionized communication and access to information. However, some argue that its negative impacts such as isolation and the spread of misinformation, outweigh its benefits. Discuss both sides of this argument and give your own opinion.

Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?

Ambition is a positive quality for people to have in society today. How important is it for people who want to succeed in life? Is it a positive or negative characteristic?

In many cities an increasing number of people do not know their neighbours and there is a lack of sense of community. What are the causes of this problem? How can it be solved?

In some countries, people encourage their children to get a job or to travel after this and education what are the advantageous and disadvantage?