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Some people think that teachers should be able to ask disruptive children to leave the class. Do you think it is the best way to deal with a disruptive child in the classroom? What other solutions are there?

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Pupils purpose is to gain knowledge in school. Sometimes, educators meet disruptive children in the class
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 who prevent other students from obtaining knowledge. For
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 reason, teachers expel them from the classroom. But I do not think that it is the right way of dealing with disruptive youngsters because there are several solutions. Certainly, we can meet
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 very frequently. And often in these situations pedagogue ask them to leave the classroom. But it is wrong. Junior in
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 does not comprehend the value of education, and for them abandoning the room means nothing. But schoolmasters understand the significance of education. If a child will always leave the class due to his inappropriate actions, he will miss the chance to get information and it will have a negative effect on their and county's future. For these causes
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 do believe that there are better approaches to adolescents who violated discipline. As a student, I always saw children who try to interrupt the lesson and can confidently mention, that most of the time they do it with their friends. They sit together, tell jokes and laugh
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, it is a good idea to make extra classes for these students where they will be given lessons
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they can punish the guilty by giving them extra homework or make the entire lesson stand against the wall. To conclude, kicking schoolchildren out of class is not right attitude and there are diverse
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • disruptive
  • behavior
  • classroom
  • solution
  • approach
  • implement
  • positive reinforcement
  • rewards
  • additional support
  • resources
  • counseling
  • therapy
  • involving
  • parents
  • guardians
  • supportive
  • inclusive
  • classroom environment
  • managing
  • effective
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