In recent years,women's roles have changed dramatically.what changes have occurred?do you think these changes are positive or negative?

In the modern era

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woman

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a woman

the woman

has

pivotal place

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a pivotal place

in every field than before

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due to burgeoning of new substantial roles

supersed

take the place or move into the position of

supersede

the bygone roles.In the following paragraph

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will discourse the

myraid

too numerous to be counted

myriad

of changes that have

occured

come to pass

occurred

and

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believe that these changes undoubtedly will lead to positive influence on

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any of various alternatives; some other

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the things that have significantly changed are equality of females in society

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as in

education sector

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the education sector

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in

job sector

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the job sector

and in other fields.In the contemporary world

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girls are more educated and talented than boys

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Apart from that conscious about study and inventions.

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a recent study has revealed that 60 % of girls are more educated in the world than boys.

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Secondly, the best

thing is that now they have right to do jobs in any organization

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even in some fields males are doing jobs under females which is

huge complement

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a huge compliment

huge compliment

for them. In my views, these changes have led to positive impact on societies as well as

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in

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children.

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Moreover, they

are one of the reason of development as they are doing great work in research

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airlines

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space exploration and many more.Apart from that

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there

of them or themselves

their

efforts in research make our

lifes

a characteristic state or mode of living

lives

life

more convenient

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save human lives and

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the earth

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, they are educated

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eventually they would more aware about how to nurture their children

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how to maintain

healthy life

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a healthy life

healthy lives

and enlighten them regarding preservation of health ailments. In conclusion

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would say the different changes are

occured

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occurring

occurred

due to

mislaneous

consisting of a haphazard assortment of different kinds

miscellaneous

roles of woman in different

fiels

a fixed charge for a privilege or for professional services

fees

fields

that are due to the education level that

directy

without deviation

directly

direct

effects world prosperity and develop healthy life.The thing is that developed countries need

educated

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to educate

people and contribution of woman have helped nation to develop.