Younger employees have more skills, knowledge and more motivated than older employees. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Support your argument with your own experience.

it can be argued that yourger employes have more skills and
knowledge
to do a better
work
than the older ones, specially beacuse it can vary depending on the person, thought its true that newer of fresher employes can aproach their duties with a more focused and ambicious
way
of thinking, and with a greater will to develop more significant and valuables skills, that approach does not always means they provide more
knowledge
to the chain of
work
. It is
acurrate
conforming exactly or almost exactly to fact or to a standard or performing with total accuracy
accurate
inaccurate
to say that younger persons that are fresh out the
accademy
a secondary school (usually private)
academy
academic
have a bigger will to carry that
knowledge
from the theory to the practice, and prove themselves in the professional
field
, having current and modern information about how their respective area of
bussiness
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
businesses
function nowadays. Now, taking in consideration that younger workers are just starting to build a financial life on their own, they can
also
exhibit a more aggresive and powerfull aproach to
work
more hours, harder shifts, or to face carreer challenges in a more possitive
way
than older workers, in oder to achiever a more lucrative sallary and a status of corporative success among their peers.
However
, having more textbook
knowledge
and more focused skills does not mean having more real life
knowledge
, since most of it comes from working
experience
in the
field
, and that kind of wisdom only can be adquired with years and years of practice, that lack of
experience
can lead to mistakes and drawbacks that can have high cost to a company that have based most of their
work
force on younger, more skilled, but yet inexperienced workers.
On the other hand
, older workers have their eficiency conditioned by two factors, the firs one being their habit of performing
work
task in the same
way
they have been doing them though all their years of
experience
, even if those ways can spend more resourses, more time, or simply there is a current
way
to do it better of wich they are not informed neither interested in, and the
second
one is their personal life, usually older employes already know how their lives are going to be and what they need for it,
therefore
it is more likelly for them to not make as much efforts to improve themselves of to dedicate to their
work
more time or energy than the basic to achieve their functions. to conclude, even when a younger worker can be more skilled and more driven to
work
hard and bring new and fresh ideas to the
field
, it is not wise neither productive to rely an entire workforce on the shoulders of younger persons, the
knowledge
and
experience
of workers with years in the
field
, are as well necesary to provide a balance between the view of how the things had been done in the past with success, and how they can be done in the future bringing new tools to the table.
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