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Some people believe that modern technology has enhanced sociable behaviour, but others think it has reduced social interactions. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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It is often argued that people get
more interactive
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more interaction
 with the help of modern
technology
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.
However
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, few people believe that it has decreased the physical interaction among the people. I personally believe that modern
technology
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 is just the medium of interaction and it’s the individual’s choice whether they want to be more social or spend its
time
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 in isolation.
To begin
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 with, in
this
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 contemporary era,
technology
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 has played an inevitable role in the communication between human being. There are many social networking sites available in the world which facilitates the interaction and communication between the people. Many people around the world make new friends, exchange their views on the public forum and share their interests just because of the revolution of social networking sites.
On the other hand
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, few people believe that nowadays people like to spend more their
time
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 with their gadgets, mobile phones, playing online games and
thus
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, they get less social with other people and spend
their most of the
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the most of their
time
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 in the isolation. A study conducted by Harvard study found that people who spend most of the
time
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 with their phones and gadgets usually have a small friend circle. Even the children, who earlier used to spend their
time
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 playing physical sports in parks with other children, are now over-indulged with online games, mobile phones,
therefore
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, their social circle
get
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gets
is getting
 shrunk day by day. I personally believe that it’s the individual’s choice and behaviour which decide the social circle of the person, not the
technology
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. People who are extrovert, they don’t need any
technology
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 to get socialized and make friends. After
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consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing
 the above
scenario it
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scenario, it
 is not very hard to come
on
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to
 the consensus that there is a polarized opinion in the society about the usage of modern
technology
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 for being a catalyst in enhancing the social behaviour of the person.
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