As global trade increases between different countries, many daily necessities are produced in other countries. Such goods are usually transported a long distance. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh its drawbacks?

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In
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commercialized / globalized world, many countries are importing goods from other countries for local consumption. In my opinion, there are both advantages and disadvantages to
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practice. To start with the advantages, the
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of goods improves the living standards of people and
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keeps prices in check.
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, when goods are imported from abroad, local manufacturers cannot increase their prices beyond a certain level.
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benefits the customer.
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,
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practice makes high quality foreign products available in the local
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.
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, almost all countries
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smart phones made by acclaimed brands like Apple. If these are not imported people in many developing countries will have to be content with whatever is locally available. Importing
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increases competition in the
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and
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will encourage the local manufacturers to innovate to stay competitive. In
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short, there
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importing goods. On the flip side, if
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the imported goods
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, it will break the back of the local economy. When retailers can easily
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cheap goods from abroad, local manufacturers will be forced to reduce the prices of their products. While
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makes goods more affordable for the end user, it can hurt the interests of local businesses and they will be forced to shut shop. Eventually,
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will lead to unemployment. Another disadvantage of importing is that it is not good for the environment. When goods have to be transported thousands of miles, more fossil fuels have to be burnt and
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leads to the emission of more greenhouse gases. In short, there are certainly some benefits to importing goods.
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, if a product is already available in the local
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, its
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should be discouraged to protect the interests of the local economy. It is
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important to consider the environmental consequences of transporting goods long distances.
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