Many people believe that we should protect all wild animals while others believe we should just protect some of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Most people would agree that all
animals
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animal
species in wild nature should be protected. There is a
different
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difference
of opinions,
however
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, others consider that only rare wild animals ought to be
keep
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kept
safe in the wildlife. In
this
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essay, I will examine both points of views and
then
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state my own opinion. Those who support the protection of every wild animal claimed that
loss
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the loss
a loss
of species could break a balance of
ecosystem
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the ecosystem
ecosystems
, and of course
this
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activity might affect
environment
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the environment
. It means, every creature is
linked each other
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linked with each other
like
chain
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a chain
.
For example
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, if one species of animals are getting
wipe
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wiped
out even they are violent animals, undoubtedly
this
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process may contribute
to be
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to being
extinction
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extinct
among other types.
Hence
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, these supporters always want not to disturb on biodiversity and they suggested that illegal hunting or poaching should be restricted by
low
the collection of rules imposed by authority
law
. Meanwhile, opponents of them claim that the government should protect some animals that are entered “Red Book” because of their number is declining extremely. There are numerous illnesses which are incredibly dangerous for human life.
This
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is because an animal testing is one of the
affective
producing or capable of producing an intended result or having a striking effect
effective
way
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ways
to save lives and create new treatment. That’s why some type of animals are crucial factor
such
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as rabbits,
rets
any of various long-tailed rodents similar to but larger than a mouse
rats
and so on, in
laboratory
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the laboratory
a laboratory
. In conclusion, there are convincing argument on both sides of the discussion, but I believe that an appropriate way is testing on animals and sacrificing them for human safety. Not only humans but
also
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animals might be wiped out because of infectious diseases like COVID 19, unless
this
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way is used.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • conservation status
  • ecological significance
  • holistic approach
  • endangered species
  • natural heritage
  • unforeseen negative impacts
  • economically non-viable
  • prioritization
  • ecosystem balance
  • conservation efforts
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