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More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world.

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In
this
 modern age, there is a persistent growth of the people who are
moving to abroad
Suggestion
moving abroad
 to live their
life
 better and comfortable. In
this
 essay, I will discuss that developed countries are fetching the talent of underdeveloped
counties
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
. Some people think that rich countries have better learning opportunities specially in the field of medicine, engineering and computer for them,
this
 is the reason why most of the younger
generation
are moving
Suggestion
is moving
 to abroad to avail
this
 opportunity.
Moreover
, young talent
believe
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believes
 that they have
better future
Suggestion
a better future
 and comfortable
life
 in developed countries as compared to the poor countries. Unemployment is an another reason that
make
Suggestion
makes
 a big migration to rich countries.
Furthermore
, people are helpless to do jobs
on
Suggestion
for
with
 low wages due to the challenging economic condition of the country. More importantly, safe and secure
life
 is the right of every
person but
Accept comma addition
person, but
 unfortunately, poor countries lack in
this
 context.
Therefore
, young
generation
are getting
Suggestion
is getting
 more fascinated by the facilities and safety of the rich countries and they want a secure future for their family as well.
On the other hand
, there are people who study from developed countries but want to go back to serve their own countries. These people are the real supporters of their countries and really want to change the future of their home countries. These are the patriotic people who want
take
Suggestion
to take
 their country up high and want to change the perspective of
young
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the young generation
generation
 who want to leave their country at any cost. To conclude
this
 essay, I strongly believe that
young
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the young generation
generation
 should avail any opportunity that can make their
life
 secure, safe and better.
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