Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
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also
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such
places.
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situations people
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such
places changes there
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involved
life
. People have different immunity levels or they can push themselves till certain limit. This
creates high risks of health issues or some terrible situations can disturb them mentally as well. Some people even lost their life
while going to extreme conditions. Example, I live in desert conditions and I have seen many tourists faint while exploring new places and they are rushed to hospitals. Sometimes, these places are not developed or have great medical facilities makes travel more dangerous for them.
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