Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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Exploring the most

adventures

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adventure

places of

earth

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the earth

new trend

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a new trend

the new trend

among youngsters. Tourists are increasing day by day, for places where

life

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is difficult

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going through tough situations make people feel strong and

boot

increase

boost

their

confidence but

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confidence, but

they can

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risk their

life

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while exploring

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places. In

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essay we will discuss

pros

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the pros

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places.

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Life

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is a big challenge currently and it takes us through

different phases or ups

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the different phases or ups

& downs. To win these

situations people

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situations, people

prepare themselves by doing highly difficult tasks. One of them is by going out of their comfort zone and pushes themselves by visiting places like Sahara deserts or

Antarctic

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the Antarctic

. Visiting

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places changes

there

of them or themselves

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routine or lifestyle and they learn about leading a difficult

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. People learn a new lifestyle and it is

experience

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an experience

the experience

lifetime

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a lifetime

for them.

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, I recently visited Himalayan ranges

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from

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place

till -7oc. It enhanced my confidence to settle in

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the region of the United States lying to the north of the Mason-Dixon line

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American or European countries. So, it prepares them to survive in all kinds of situations and environment, which is really important to be successful.

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, Visiting

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places becomes

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involved

high risk of health and

life

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. People have different immunity levels or they can push themselves till certain limit.

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creates high risks of health issues or some terrible situations can disturb them mentally as well. Some people even lost their

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life

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lives

while going to extreme conditions. Example, I live in desert conditions and I have seen many tourists faint while exploring new places and they are rushed to hospitals. Sometimes, these places are not developed or have great medical facilities makes travel more dangerous for them. To conclude, To make

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tours more positive and motivate people for

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things

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there should be various test for people before beginning

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tours and they should carry all important precautionary measures. Internet plays

important role

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an important role

in preparing for these tours as every

details

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detail

is available on

internet

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the internet

now. Government and tourist organisations should take all safety measures and brief all

tourist

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tourists

regarding problems they can face with solutions.

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unique ecosystems
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personal growth
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