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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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Exploring the most
adventures
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adventure
 places of
earth
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the earth
 is
new trend
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a new trend
the new trend
 among youngsters. Tourists are increasing day by day, for places where
life
 is difficult
.
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.
Although
 going through tough situations make people feel strong and
boot
increase
boost
 their
confidence but
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confidence, but
 they can
also
 risk their
life
 while exploring
such
 places. In
this
 essay we will discuss
pros
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the pros
 and cons of visiting
such
 places.
Firstly
,
Life
 is a big challenge currently and it takes us through
different phases or ups
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the different phases or ups
 & downs. To win these
situations people
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situations, people
 prepare themselves by doing highly difficult tasks. One of them is by going out of their comfort zone and pushes themselves by visiting places like Sahara deserts or
Antarctic
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the Antarctic
. Visiting
such
 places changes
there
of them or themselves
their
 routine or lifestyle and they learn about leading a difficult
life
. People learn a new lifestyle and it is
experience
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an experience
the experience
 of
lifetime
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a lifetime
 for them.
For example
, I recently visited Himalayan ranges
for
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from
 2 days and explored that
places
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place
 till -7oc. It enhanced my confidence to settle in
north
the region of the United States lying to the north of the Mason-Dixon line
North
 American or European countries. So, it prepares them to survive in all kinds of situations and environment, which is really important to be successful.
On the other hand
, Visiting
such
 places becomes
involve
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involved
 high risk of health and
life
. People have different immunity levels or they can push themselves till certain limit.
This
 creates high risks of health issues or some terrible situations can disturb them mentally as well. Some people even lost their
life
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lives
 while going to extreme conditions. Example, I live in desert conditions and I have seen many tourists faint while exploring new places and they are rushed to hospitals. Sometimes, these places are not developed or have great medical facilities makes travel more dangerous for them. To conclude, To make
such
 tours more positive and motivate people for
such
 things
,
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,
 there should be various test for people before beginning
such
 tours and they should carry all important precautionary measures. Internet plays
important role
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an important role
 in preparing for these tours as every
details
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detail
 is available on
internet
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the internet
 now. Government and tourist organisations should take all safety measures and brief all
tourist
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tourists
 regarding problems they can face with solutions.
Submitted by Vishal Gurejani on

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