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Inventors are not that important as doctors. how far do you agree or disagree?

#inventors #doctors
I agree with the given statement to some extent only. As
both
 inventors and doctors belong to different categories of professionals,
both
 have their own importance. Inventors, who create products with their skills where as doctors have the right skills to make use of these products for humans as well as for other organisms when we are in need. I feel
both
 playing different but important roles in our world. Inventors developed various medicines, vaccines other essential things like electricity, TV it's that to comfort a
lives
Suggestion
life
 stop these inventions have changed the entire word. Today, medicines are available for almost every disease except some, but research work is being carried out continuously for these. Doctors,
on the other hand
, save our lies. If we get in, we need to known reasons behind that doctors at that time find out what is wrong with us and treat according to that so we cannot live without doctors.
Although
 the doctors depend on inventors for their work. So
both
 doctors and inventors are interdependent on each other. To conclude, according to me doctors and inventors are equally important as
both
 play important roles in human progress.
Submitted by aman gill on

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