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In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the internet without any face-to-face contact with others. To what extent is this a positive or negative development?

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Peoples are buying, working and communicating from the internet without seeing a person face-to-face is exactly popularly in these days. Those
kind
 of activities of shopping, working, communicating from online
is seems
Suggestion
seems
 quite useful in
this
 quarantine days
also
.
Because as
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Because, as
 you know there are happening corona virus outbreak. So every country of citizens are lockdown on their own house. For those
kind
 of connection may happen some positive development or negative issues changes. In
this
 essay, I will explain my opinions of both
side
Suggestion
sides
 of views with an example. The development of online services
make
Suggestion
makes
 employees and consumers to reduce the amount of spending time for
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 to their related places
such
 as shops, workplaces, etc. Peoples are using
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 to make an online shopping for their
business
. The positive
fact
 about it is making a
costomers
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customer
customers
customer's
 to save their time to go to the clothing shops for bargaining and buying. The negative
fact
 is that products from the online shop can be a fake in reality like their quality and design are totally different from the one day uploaded to sell from the online. And, some peoples are doing
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
kind
 of
business
such
 as online teaching, blogging, streaming to earn money from the peoples who get a service from them. So,
this
fact
 is a
kind
 of positive development because as you know fewer peoples on the streets will make the country to reduce pollution problems. The negative
fact
 is that
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
unauthorize
not endowed with authority
unauthorized
unauthorised
business
 from online can be fake to an
employees
Suggestion
employee
.
For example
, a
business
 which cannot give an insurance policy to the employees before they get a job and a
business
 which request a load of money from the employees for the entrance to their job. In the conclusion,
this
kind
 of working, shopping and communicating from online should develop and carryout for saving time and reduce the pollution problem for
this
 modern society,.
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