Humans are responsible for a variety of environmental problems, but can also take steps in order to reduce the damage caused to the plandlet. This essay will discuss environmental problems, the role of government and individual in addressing this issue affecting the planet.

These days, we are facing with a diverse amount of the environmental problems cause by
humans
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human
beeing
the state or fact of existing
beings
.
However
,
gorenmnets
together with individuals can solve
diseas
an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
disease
diseases
decease
of our planet.
This
essay will
duscuss
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
main problems
Suggestion
the main problems
of the
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
and its
affects
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
. To
beging
take the first step or steps in carrying out an action
begin
with, individual has a power to solve environmental
pollution
, as well as, government. In other worlds, people
has
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have
a choice to
contunue
continue a certain state, condition, or activity
continue
pollute planet with
plastic
and
tremendous amount
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a tremendous amount
of the car. There is no doubt, that because of the
plastic
a lot of wild and sea habitat die, that kills
eco system
a system formed by the interaction of a community of organisms with their physical environment
ecosystem
of the planet. As well as, CO2 that produce by car cause air
polution
undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
.
Moreover
, air
polution dangerous
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pollution, dangerous
pollution dangerous
not only for the
animals but
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animals, but
also
for humans, that can be
reason
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the reason
a reason
of a lot of different
deseases
an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
diseases
. Individuals can protect
eco system
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ecosystems
ecosystem
the ecosystem
with simple actions.
Firstly
, people need to recycle all
plastic
and other material. All
a round
in the area or vicinity
around
the
glode
showing or causing joy and pleasure; especially made happy
glad
globe
the
govenment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
are trying
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is trying
to recycle different materials, but most of the
citizen
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citizens
do not have
this habits
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this habit
these habits
.
Secondly
, humans need to avoid overuse of the
fosil
characteristic of a fossil
fossil
fuel car and choose
more envierment
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more environmentally
more environment
friendly cars. The government must take care of global issue that
can not
can not
cannot
be
control
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controlled
by
citizen
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a citizen
citizens
, like fabric and huge corporation that have enormous impact on environmental
pollution
. A good example
would be ban
Suggestion
would ban
contageous
easily diffused or spread as from one person to another
contagious
corparation pr
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corporation, PR
corporation pr
corporation PR
corparation PR
corparation or
incease
become bigger or greater in amount
increase
increases
taxes and fines, like Brack Obama has done in the US. Other counties should follow
exapmle
Suggestion
the example
example
of
development
Suggestion
developing
developed
countries. Taking everything into consideration, individuals and a government are the reason of the air
pollution
and contamination of a
plastic
.
Nevertheless
, there are solutions that can solve
enviromental
of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings
environmental
problems, like recycling materials, ban of dangerous fabrics and well as control of
pollution
.
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