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"In the last ten years, people have been finding they have to move away from a twelve-hour day to a twenty-four hour day. This can only have a negative effect on society, with people becoming less productive and being unable to enjoy social life."

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As far as I concerned, to develop in society, people have to work more than in the past especially for people on lower incomes.
This
 can have reasons
such
 as develop the cities, economy and in the result pay the taxes, raise the requirements in lives.
Firstly
, develop the cities, brings facilities and entertainments for making our life easier and better than past,
such
 as malls, big parks, universities, hospital and restaurants and for the use of those, buy goods or something else, they need more money. Because of
this
, they have to work 24 hours to provide enough income to live in cities and use the facilities.
for
Suggestion
For
 example, a father works 14 hours per day and has ideal income, but he does not enough
time
 to enjoy of his life.
On the other hand
,
time
 is a valuable thing even more than a diamond which make memories and people live with their memories. So working near 24 hours a day, take whole their
time which
Accept comma addition
time, which
 spends for reach income, so more
time
 at work would mean less
time
 to care for kids and house due to they cannot make good memories with them. It would mean less
time
 to bring-up children
also
 less
time
 to make a good
next
-generation and to create a community that keeps the world going to progress.
In addition
 to all the problems mentioned above, these people are exposed to many physical and mental problems. Because the human soul and body need enough rest and fun. To sum up, working more than 12 hours in a day has many negative effects on relationships, families and people's mind.
This
 can destroy civilization and our
next
 generation and convert human to robots that it will be very dangerous for the future of humans.
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