Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jams'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
It is a well-known fact that the number of cars has increased rapidly in the
last
thirty years. It has become the main issue in the world.
Traffic congestion is the main reason that cause one big traffic jam. The rate of private car has grown
dramatically over the Suggestion
grew
last
century. Consequently
, there are a number of negative effects such
as noise and air pollution.Imposing green tax on the sale of new cars and fuel could be the first
solution to such
problem. One advantage is that it they can invest more in public transport. If people find that it could save their money and time, they will prefer to use public transport.
In conclusion, althoughmost cities struggle
with the problem of traffic congestion, government can solve Suggestion
although the most cities struggle
although most cities struggle
this
problem by imposing carbon tax on private cars and improving public transport.Submitted by Jason wu on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite