A foreign friend of your plans to visit your place and stay with you, but you do not have time on that date. Give your friend another alternate date to come. In your letter, you should: .apology for it .Explain what you will busy for on that date .Suggest to him /her an alternate time to come

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Dear Sony, I hope

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letter finds you and your family all well. I am writing to tell you that I want to make some changes to our plan. I was so excited to meet with you

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weekend, but unfortunately, there is a change of plan. I know, it is difficult to digest because we planned

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month ago, I really apologize about it. Remember

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month, I told you about my business trip to Canada, which was on the 24th of March 2020. Sadly, they changed the date now

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will going

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week.

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, the company has already booked the tickets, and it is mandatory for all the employees to attend the conference. Since you have not been booked your tickets yet, we can still decide on a different date. I will be back on 30th March and my vacation would be until 20th April, so please let me know whichever date is feasible for you, and

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we can plan

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. I know

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must be an inconvenience because of

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short notice, but I hope you understand, and I sincerely apologize for

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trouble

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may have caused. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours lovingly, Reena

Kulvir kaur DhaliwalMon Jun 15 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

206 words

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