Overpopulation in many urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes and how can this problem be solved?

In todays era population is increasing day by day. As in many bigger cities it is a major issue.
this
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This
essay will explain some reasons causing
this
problem
and will provide some of the solutions regarding
this
.
Firstly
the major issue to
this
problem
is the migration of rural people from
countryside
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the countryside
to cities as
this
problem
is caused because of lack of employment
oppurtunities
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
amd
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
amenities in rural areas.
due
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Due
to
this
they are forced to migrate towards cities.
secondly in
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Secondly, in
Secondly in
rural areas there is
lack
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a lack
of facilities like proper schooling
,
Accept space
,
healthcare facilities, there are few colleges, universities or educational institutions.
finally
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Finally
better job facilities
,
Accept space
,
health care facilities and good infrastructure
compled
act in accordance with someone's rules, commands, or wishes
complied
complex
rural people to shift in big cities.
these
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These
all are the main reasons why people move to cities If we think peacefully, it is not difficult to
suggesst
make a proposal, declare a plan for something
suggest
some solutions regarding
this
problem
.
to
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To
stop migration
for
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from
countryside to cities better infrastructure
,
Accept space
,
better employment
facilites
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
,
Accept space
,
good
healthcare
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health care
system,
good educational institution
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good educational institutions
should be provide
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should be provided
to the village dwellers,
government
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the government
should make these areas as special
economiz
of or relating to an economy, the system of production and management of material wealth
economic
zones
(
Accept space
(
sez's
a city in northeastern Egypt at the head of the Gulf of Suez and at the southern end of the Suez Canal
Suez
). As
this
will attract many big
industrialize
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industrial
companies.
Further
government
sholud
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
help farmers to increase their
agriculture
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agricultural
productivity by providing better seeds and
good irrigation system
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a good irrigation system
and should arrange good market prices for their produce.
as
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As
this
were
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was
some solutions to
this
problem
. In
concluson
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
conclusions
,
this
booming population in urban areas
are possesing
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is passing
are passing
are processing
are possessing
many grave risks of pollution, overcrowding, over urban
dewellers
a person who inhabits a particular place
dwellers
dweller
. As
this
essay
explain
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explains
some reasons causing the
problem
and
also
suggested some ways to
cpoe
come to terms with
cope
up with
this
problem
.
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  • Urbanization
  • Migration
  • Sustainable development
  • Infrastructure
  • Population density
  • Urban sprawl
  • Urban planning
  • Renewable energy
  • Family planning
  • Rural economies
  • Public transport
  • Living standards
  • Healthcare access
  • Educational facilities
  • Employment opportunities
  • Regulations
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