The world of work is rapidly changing, and employees cannot depend on having the same work or the same work conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare for people to work in the future.

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Work patterns are evolving and workers are not guaranteed same job and job environment

for ever

for a limitless time

forever

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is due to several reasons as will be outlined below and likely ways we can be prepared for the new future of work. A lot of jobs are becoming obsolete as there are new equipments and discoveries in our world on a daily basis. An example is the

type writer

hand-operated character printer for printing written messages one character at a time

typewriter

which has been replaced with a computer that can do much more than typesetting documents. These new discoveries means that we have to take learning and unlearning seriously as a skill. The robots that have taken over most of manufacturing and new mediums of communications which have taken over the door to door salesman job has happened

stealthly

at a steady rate or pace

steadily

stealthily

over the past years. The introduction of the internet has changed

jobs

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job

outlook and with the present pandemic a lot of things are gaining presence online. From shopping, we have virtual shopping, to drone deliveries

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online meetings, concerts

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fund raising

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fundraising

via the internet, mobile banking the list is endless. Certain jobs will be obsolete in a few years with these new jobs related to

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the internet

and computing gaining momentum.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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The world of work is rapidly changing, and employees cannot depend on having the same work or the same work conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare for people to work in the future.

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think museums and art galleries should show works of art and history from their own country rather than from diff erent parts of the world. Do you agree or disagree ?

Some people say cultural traditions are destroyed when they are used as money- making attractions aimed at tourists. Others say this is the only way to save such traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or not agree?

Now a alot of people in college are doing academic study. We should encourge them to learn vocational skill ( like plumbers and electricity). Do you agree or disagree.?

Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.