There are more cars on the roads these days and more accidents are happening. As a result, some people have suggested that people should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single test. What do you think are the advantages of repeat driving tests? Do these outweigh the disadvantages?

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increased, which has resulted in more people buying cars for their personal usage.
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may have been the cause of the increased road traffic and accidents, I believe
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cannot be the reason
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that people will need to take driving
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on a regular interval.
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, driving is a basic life skill. Just like riding a
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, it is impossible to forget driving a car.
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, it is obvious that a person
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who is familiar and experienced with driving
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will be careful
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taking the test and will follow all the rules at that time.
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, I have seen many drivers
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slow
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follow the speed limit
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when they know that there is a speed camera placed on that road. If driving skills and drivers’ obligation to traffic rules are to be tested, regular driving
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will not be productive, as they can be easily forged.
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, in a populous country like India, arranging regular driving
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can be cumbersome.
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, it took a month for me to book a driving test date as a new driver. I can only imagine the horror
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the drivers will have to face
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when people with existing
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added to the queue.
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, I believe that
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of more
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and
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making the process more difficult in turn, we can make our laws stringent and
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the rule flouters heavily, so that the drivers can become more careful
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driving.
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will not only ensure
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accidents, but
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result in a better driving experience.

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Give more clear advantages of repeat tests and more clear drawbacks. Then show your own view in a short final line.
structure
Add a short conclusion that repeats your view. Make a small plan in the first paragraph.
coherence
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Provide at least two real examples or facts to back up each point. This will show stronger evidence.
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The writer has a clear position on the topic.
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There is a real life example (booking the test) used in the essay.
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The essay uses simple and direct language which fits the task.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • up-to-date driving skills
  • driving regulations
  • road safety
  • safer driving habits
  • unfit drivers
  • health conditions
  • vigilant
  • responsible drivers
  • complacency
  • periodic assessments
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