You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board.

Dear Mr. Walker I’m very interested in
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my resume to you for a position of Quality Assurance Manager that the university is offering. I am a student of
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university and currently I am studying Business Administration so I am sure that I can contribute my knowledge to carry out the required tasks.
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further
information, please let me know Yours sincerely Marco Nufrio
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