You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand and what measure could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Fresh
water
is very important to live for the people around the world. The main
problem
of fresh
water
that it is not available for all them. So
number
Suggestion
the number
a number
of people grow up
water
is necessary for us. Let's say that Africa, there
aren'
Suggestion
isn't
t
water
not like fresh. There aren'
t
equipped with
water
supply.
Problem
Suggestion
The problem
is with money and poor. Even we live development country, not always
use
fresh
water
, we
use
water
, which cleaned with chloride and it isn'
t
not healthy. I would like that government do something with it global ecological problems. It can
delivered
Suggestion
deliver
fresh
water
from the cities which located near the sea, river to the countries don'
t
have
water
.
For example
, I live in the ecological city Kyzylorda. Near the city located Aral
Sea which
Accept comma addition
Sea, which
don'
t
have
water
, because people don'
t
use
correctly and in the right direction. To not have
global
Suggestion
a global problem
problem
with
water
, government must ban
use
the
water
simply. Maybe,
this
is
reason
Suggestion
the reason
is not answered
problem
, but if people understand the importance of
water
, they will can attention to
this
problem
.
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