Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A few person says that it is even more beneficial to provide education to the male pupil and female pupil in different schools and some,
on the other hand
, contradicts the above statement. They believe that the opposite gender pupils get more advantages when studying in a duet
school
.
This
essay will elucidate both the statements followed by my own opinion. At the outset, if a girl and a boy are studying in a different education centres, it would be more beneficial for them to focus on the studies than to make friendships with each other. As because they are opposite genders, they will naturally attract each other and may fall in love at the very early age that could affect their mindset to give proper time towards studies.
For instance
, my uncle's daughter has achieved ninety percent marks in high
school
and
this
had become possible only because she had not any male buddies to chat and hung out with.
This
is her statement that proves the concept.
However
,
on the other hand
, if they are studying together, it can provide them confidence to speak and react to each other that they can never have in a separate
school
. And
this
, is a very important factor that we need to look over.
This
is my own experience, that, I have no guts to communicate with a girl while in a personal or professional meeting. All
this
is because I have never had a communication with anyone in
school
.
This
does not mean I have scored a lot, because I was not having distractions in my life.
Although
, I scored good marks, but,
this
does not mean you need to be away from your girl buddy. In a conclusion, I would say, that, it is not important to keep a male and a female student away from each other in their early age by keeping them in a different
school
, because it directly affects your confidence. Rather to fight with
this
unnecessary phobia, it is better to know each other and manage yourself
accordingly
in the very beginning of your life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • co-education
  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
  • discrimination
  • social skills
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • diversity
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