Some people think that it should be compulsory for people to retake their driving test every 5 years. What are advantages and disadvantages of doing this?

It’s common today creasing number of people who aren’t sure
that is
it
complusory
required by rule
compulsory
for them to
resolving
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resolve
their driving licence each 5 years or not yet.
This
essay will discuss both sides of
this
probem
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problem
and
also
supports advantages and disadvantages parts of
this
.
Firstly
, it
must be recognized one
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must be recognized as one
of the principal advantage is that there are a lots new rules are introduced by the
Governement
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
and they all should be well-known for all people.
Unfortunatelly
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Unfortunately
, nowadays not every person knows where is the latest and strongly news or rule about the retaking the driving test every 5 years. In case,
this
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
would bring many
hude
have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
had
hard
hued
accidents for
humanality
.
Moreover
, if people pass the driving exam each 5
year
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years
, it would probably decrease the
numer
the property possessed by a sum or total or indefinite quantity of units or individuals
number
of mishaps in our life.
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages
on
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of
to
this
. I strongly
appraciate
recognize with gratitude; be grateful for
appreciate
appreciated
that the main disadvantage is will be about retaking auto-test follower’s numbers.
This
means every 5 years more and more drivers retake their tests and take lots of licences. After all
this
activities
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activity
bring
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brings
the population number of drivers each 5 years and even a boy about 15-16 years old can take
this
exam test and drive for
along
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a long
. I mean that the main disadvantage would be
offence
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offended
of driver who paid a lot for
governement
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
and has more interests for car tricks at streets,
espeically
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
,
youngs
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young s
. In conclusion, human’s characters and knowledges will play the main role
on
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in
this
way.
However
, it is more safety
to
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in
multiplying numbers of retaking auto tests
such
as during a short of period and I strongly believe that it will decrease the numbers of many accidents.
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