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The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

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Today as
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Today, as
 the
life
 style of people had increased manifold and the social status
play
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plays
 a very important role in people’s
life
.
Hence to
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Hence, to
 maintain
this
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
 and the social status it has become necessary for the people to increase their earnings. To increase their income many people in today’s world are adopting more than
one
career
.
This
 has helped them to almost double their incomes. But these
also doubles
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also double
 the work load of the person.
Also
, to be successful in both the careers
one
 needs to have deep knowledge about the subject.
This
 knowledge can
be only gained
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only be gained
be gained only
 by studying the subject. Some people
also
 work for extra hours and even do work on
weekend
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weekends
the weekend
 too. All these have certainly made our pockets full of money. Another reason for people to choose
second
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second careers
a second career
career
 along with their main profession is because it is their hobby. We have seen many examples that there has been a lot of people
who
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who, although
although
 been very successful in their
career
 start something new like writing novels as their
second
career
.
This
 helps them stay secure financially and enjoy their hobbies and can even earn through it.
Hence
 it seems that no matter how successful
one
 is if he or she wants to have a new
career
 it becomes necessary for them to learn new things about their new careers. I do
also
 believe that education is a process and not a product. No matter how old
one
 is there is always something new to learn.
Therefore
, certainly education is something that continues throughout the
life
.
Submitted by PRINCY PATEL on

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