In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway line for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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In some countries, people prefer to have built many
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railway roads
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railway, roads
that can quickly reach between cities, so they should be
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on it while others believe improving existing public transport is far more critical.
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essay will discuss both views and include my opinion before writing a reasonable conclusion. Does it really need in every city? On the one hand, nowadays, the
railway
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lines are becoming in developing countries the most important and useful sector to help citizens to travel from city to another city without wasting time in traffic jams and trouble. It would not be imagined without
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railway roads
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railway, roads
in most developed countries with a high population,
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as Moscow, Beijing, Chicago, etc. Spending a considerable amount of money on a
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station and roads is extremely necessary for these biggest countries.
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: in Moscow have constructed many underground metro and railways for around 12 million people
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with satisfaction for fast trains. For those who agree with the
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statement, it was suitable for cities with many living and contact with each other. It depends on the land area of the country and the distance between cities.
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, the consumption of state
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for existing public transport is needed for cities that are less developed and with a low population.
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of building
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railway roads
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railway, roads
, cities have to improve their public transports for citizens to travel more comfortably and satiable.
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, in our town, the capital of Mongolia does not have a rail or metro, because the distance between cities is not far enough compared to the town of Russia. The
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statement undoubtedly suited to countries that have less
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and fewer citizens. In conclusion, I personally believe that the national
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should be spent on improving rail and public transports. The transportation system has always been the primary system in every country.
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