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Topic 01. It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. What do you think is the reason for a growth in the rate of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?

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As technology advances, the growth of crimes has increased in the contemporary era. Adolescents are destroying their career by involving in crimes which is affecting their future. In the following essay, I intend to delve into the causes of increasing crimes and provide solutions in my perspective. There is a plethora of reasons why
crime rate
Suggestion
the crime rate
 increases in the current generation.
Firstly
, kids is addicted to the luxury life from the childhood. What I mean, as they start going to schools and colleges, they tend to buy a trendy gadgets and costly bikes which are beyond their parents' capacity.
Therefore
, as their parents do not agree to buy, children find a ways to purchase these items.
As a result
, they start looking for options to buy and end up with doing some
crime
 in the society to fulfil the wish.
For instance
, a famous new channel complete the survey to validate the
crime
 rate in 2015 and published that
crime rate
Suggestion
the crime rate
 in youth has been increased by 30 percentage in a year. There are several ways to alleviate the crimes. Parents should own the responsibility of their kids. By closely monitoring of infants, they should be able to know the desires of their children. So that they can guide
such
 way that they get an idea of the financial burdens of their family. Some children may understand the situation and
accordingly
 they support family rather putting pressure on buying things which are not essential neither their studies nor career.
In addition
, the government should have any campaign, which educates teenagers about
crime
 and how it impact their life when they go to prison.
I
Suggestion
Input
n put it in a nutshell, I pen down, saying that, there are ways to diminish the crimes, it is the responsibility of parents and government who are the key resources to stop crimes doing their kids
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