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Nowadays many people choose to be self- employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might be the case ? What could be the disadvantage?

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The
first
 pie chart shows the percentage of
energy
 utilized for different purposes in an Australian home, whereas the
second
 one shows the amount of greenhouse gases emitted
as a result
 of
energy
 consumption. Overall, it can be seen that heating accounts for 42% of the total
energy
 consumed by an Australian household. While water heating consumes 30% of the total
energy
, other appliances use up 15%. Refrigeration, lighting and cooling consume only negligible amounts of
energy
. According to the
second
 chart, water heating is the biggest cause of
green house
a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions
greenhouse
 gas emissions in an Australian home. While heating consumed the highest amount of
energy
 (42%), it produced only about 15% of the total
green house
a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions
greenhouse
 gas emissions. Water heating consumed about 30% of the total
energy
 and was responsible for the emission of 32% of
green house
a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions
greenhouse
 gases. Other appliances consumed about 15% of the
energy but
Accept comma addition
energy, but
 caused 28% of the emissions. Refrigeration is
also
 an important cause of emission. While it consumed only 7% of the
energy
, it contributed to 14% of the total emission. Cooling and lighting caused the least amount of emissions.
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