Human activity has had negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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Living and the non living things constitute our

environment

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.Human activity has a huge impact on our

environment

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.The 21st century is an era of constant developments.Humans are constantly modifying the

environment

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around them in

order

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to meet their economic requirements and social status in the society.

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Accept space

the

indeginious

originating where it is found

indigenous

people are constantly displaced from their area in

order

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to build new dams and factories to meet the economic criteria in

order

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to survive in the society.

This

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displacement has

further

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led to the displacement of wild animals living in those areas.The animals are kept in wildlife

sancturies

a consecrated place where sacred objects are kept

sanctuaries

which has a negative impact on their mental health.The animals who used to

rome

move about aimlessly or without any destination, often in search of food or employment

roam

room

run

freely in the forest are now locked up in a cage which has led to depression and anxiety amongst them.A lot of plants which were grown around the areas are now cut down leading to loss of plant reserves in our country.The deforestation has led to a low air index and has made the area more polluted. The birds who used to live in trees have now lost their home and are searching for new homes.The setting up of towers by cutting down trees has led to loss of habitat and

affecing

arousing affect

affecting

the animals and birds of those areas.We humans have to bring certain changes in our

activites

any specific behavior

activities

order

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to save the animals and plants of the world.Various activists have come forward in

order

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to save plants.

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THE CHIPKO MOVEMENT which

waa

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

was

led by SUDHA BANERJEE was one of the most popular

one

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ones

in which people used to hug trees saving them from cutting down by the

industralist

someone who manages or has significant financial interest in an industrial enterprise

industrialist

industrialists

. Various other movements have been led out by various nationalist and activists around the world.We need to change our

attitutes

a complex mental state involving beliefs and feelings and values and dispositions to act in certain ways

attitudes

towards our

environment

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so that we can save our future and save our mother earth before

its

it is

it's

too late.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

307 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

negative impact
extinct
deforestation
pollution
habitat destruction
mitigate
reverse
stricter regulations
protected areas
endangered species
education and awareness campaigns
biodiversity
consequences
renewable energy sources
organic farming
eco-tourism
environmental regulations
sustainable practices
natural ecosystems
preserve biodiversity

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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We always say that there is a generation gap and there always will be. What causes generation gap? Is there no way to strike a balance in the relations between two generations?

Some people say that the best way to improve health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others,However,say that this woud have little effect on public health and that other measure are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.