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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last 10 years. Discuss the cause and effects of this disturbing trend

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Nowadays, obesity is the most common issue among all ages and societies.
Nonetheless
,
western children group
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western, children group
the western children's group
the western children's group the western children's group
western children's group
 shows a significant rise in the proportion of these people by approximately 20 percent in the
last
decate
a period of 10 years
decade
debate
. The main reasons for
this
 grieve trend are mainly the new inventions in food and technology spheres and the effects might be fatal. Over the
last
 few
decats
formerly a gold coin of various European countries
ducats
, fast food is significantly gaining in popularity within youths. Due to the cheap and unhealthy products used in these restaurants the prices are considerably reasonable which suits for children and students.
In addition
, in
Eropean
of or relating to or characteristic of Europe or the people of Europe
European
 countries young people are fully engaged
into
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in
 the educational process, so they have no time for doing any sports.
Furthermore
, unfortunately technological development plays
a
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an
 essential role in the new generation's life style,
that is
 why they are spending most of their leisure time
infront
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in front
 of the innovative gadgets. After some period, children are going to straggle from mainly healthy
deseases
an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
diseases
, like obesity, poor skin condition and even
hurt
the locus of feelings and intuitions
heart
 problems
in
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at
 early ages.
Besides
, there might
occure
come to pass
occur
 emotional issues, because overweight students usually are mocked from their classmates or indeed from their family members. On top of that, people who were with obesity issues as children have a huge chance to born weak babies later in their lives. In conclusion, parents have a
responce
a result
response
 to prohibit their offsprings some kinds of products, especially eating street food and not let them sitting
infront
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in front
 technological gadgets so many hours per day.
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